The ocean.
Filled with whispering waves.
Calm.
From some distance.
Pebbles.
Whipped.
Rocked.
Adrift.
Cleansed with perpetual undulation.
The ocean, the pebbles. One.
Only Until.
Another land separates them.
I am now
The Ocean
Filled with whispers scarcely heard.
Calm.
Only from some distance.
And my dreams
are taken.
There are days and
There is a day
just
Ours.
What am I This Time?
10.16.2008
Posted by caca at 12:54 AM
Labels: orginal writings, poem, poetry
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8 comments:
Ganda caca..
salamat :P
Lovely and exquisite poem. This is a masterpiece my young friend. Truly you were inspired to write this soulful message from your heart. I love it. Compact yet bursting with myriads of meaning and message. Thanks for the exquisite poem. God bless you always my young friend.
salamat mel, kayo lang ata ni stray ang matiyaga dito sa poetry page ko. pero since consistent yung mga comment nyo, naniniwala na ko. hehehe!
kidding erased, salamat talaga. :P
Napakaganda ng poem mong ito. I can't help na balik balikan para basahin. It is a masterpiece. I also dabble in poetry and I can say that this is a master poem. I give it a prefect 10. O masaya ka na? You are really a born artist. God bless you always my young friend.
masayang masaya. hahaha! because i am born. hahah!
Hi Caca,
May I request for urgent prayers for sis Emmyrose of Just Let Go. She's suffering right now from lupus flare and is confined at the hospital. I reposted her post at my blog Random Thoughts. I would appreciate it very much if you could visit her at her site and leave a message of love and comfort for her. Thank you so much my young friend and God bless you always.
elo mel sawamat sa madalas na pagbisita. hehehe! midyu bisi si inday. hehehe
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