I am tired of shadows that kill my light Of mouths that wish I have happiness but will not look at my suffering And of mouths, still, that want I equal greatness but will not hear my cries.
I can't remember the last time I do not hate.
HATE, I want to leave but HATE I want to stay
Where then shall I take anger that I may forget?
But
is there a place where To-Forget does not hurt?
I am Tired
10.06.2008
Posted by caca at 9:16 PM
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"I can't remember the last time I do not hate."
"is there a place where To-Forget does not hurt?"
bangis.
Hi Caca,
Your poem reveals a bitter heart. You may have been hurt before but that should not leave your heart bitter. Hate is a negative word. Learn to forgive and forget and to move on in your life. There will be more pains and sorrows along the way. Some you will hurt and others will hurt you. In the process, try to learn the lessons that life is imbibing you. Then you will emerge complete and fulfilled in your life. Ganda poem kaya lang parang me message ng hurt feelings and hatred, nakakalungkot tuloy, hu,hu,hu,hu. Sige bawi ka na lang sa susuond mong relationships. Thanks for the moving poetry. God bless you always my young friend.
I wish I knew of such a place
stray, para naman akong leon na gala nyan eh. hehehe!
Mel, di naman ako bitter (asus, deny), kaya ka lang kelangan kong balik-balikan ang sakit para may maisulat ako dito.hahaha, ika nga i want hate to leave, but hate i want it to stay. hehehe! baliw na kung baliw!
confused, maybe someday we'll get there :)
a bit sensitive topic this week but i hope you'll still participate.=) here's our coffee break http://labskiddies.blogspot.com/2008/10/coffee-break-ver-139.html
"stray, para naman akong leon na gala nyan eh. hehehe!"
Perfect, isa kang leong gala sa bangis sa mga artik na gaya neto.
"Mel, di naman ako bitter (asus, deny), kaya ka lang kelangan kong balik-balikan ang sakit para may maisulat ako dito.hahaha,"
Mukhang di nga ah.. Move on na kasi fwen. hehehe.. pero wag sayang ang mga mababasang artik na ito. sarap kayang makarelate.
there's no easy way naman eh, move on lang talaga. wahahah, baduy!
thanks for dropping by, uhm, i write poems too, but not as good as you..
You are to me the greatest friend
As precious as a million gems,
When I'm with you I feel so proud,
I hope fore'er our friendship's bound.
When I'm unhappy you are there
When I am sad you're there to care,
When I am happy you are too,
You just love everything I do.
I would never want to lose you
Hope you don't want to lose me too,
You are to me the greatest friend,
As precious as a million gems.
here's one of my short compositions, like it?
hi jave,
your poem is sweet. is that for your bestfriend? :)
and jave,
leave me with your link so i can check more of your poems. :) thanks for dropping by. :)
Hi Caca,
Thanks for your visit and your interesting viewpoint. Just blog hopping and passing by. Thanks again and God bless you my young friend.
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